Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Portfolio revision plans

Considering how much time has passed since we wrote the News Brief and the Interview/Profile, it makes the most sense to me to revise those two. After not thinking about them for a while, I plan to return to them with my "editor hat" on, so to speak — I'm not attached to the words I wrote because I don't really remember them precisely, so I can go in there objectively and change a bunch of stuff.

The News Brief revision will most likely involve re-ordering the information in there and highlighting the most interesting "newsy" things in it, as well as tweaking the wording to be more precise and/or interesting.

The Profile revision should be interesting, because after writing my initial draft and receiving feedback from my peers I re-wrote the entire thing. But even after that, it's not that great. I struggled writing it because I didn't feel I had the authority to write such a thing after a half-hour conversation in which I probably asked the wrong questions and looked like an idiot, so basically I'm lacking confidence in it. That's why I think my "editor hat" will be especially helpful when I revise it, because I can work with what's there and more objectively decide what's missing or how to best present the stuff I do know.

4 comments:

  1. I had the same thoughts Karen...that I'd like to go back to the first two pieces because they would look unfamiliar and I would have the necessary distance to be able to be critical of my own work.

    I wouldn't worry about the authority thing. It's your interpretation of the science that people want to read. Otherwise they'd read peer reviewed journals right?!?

    ReplyDelete
  2. I hadn't thought about not being attached to what we wrote when going back to revise. I think you have a good idea.

    I'm curious to see what you did with you profile because I haven't seen it since you completely redid it. And I agree with Matt in that, even if you don't feel like you have the authority to write after a quick interview, what reader's find interesting is how you weave what you have into a story and put it into your own words. Good luck revising! (Oh,and on your capstone project... :) )

    ReplyDelete
  3. I'm curious to see your revised profile too! I think having some distance is a good idea, but I also really liked how the draft of your feature turned out--it was an engaging read. :-)

    Susan

    ReplyDelete
  4. Hello Dear,
    You can visit our website at least once. We provide the best quality Victor Graphics, Logo, T-shirt, AI-generated images, AI-generated PNGs & Facebook Bio Free Designs. Those who want to earn free income at home. This is a big opportunity for them. If you are looking for a good quality graphics design for your personal or commercial use. Or those who work on Print On Demand ( POD ) sites. They can freely use our designs. For example, Merch by Amazon, Redbubble, Zazzle, Teespring, TeePublic, Printify, etc. You can easily use our free designs on all these sites. No copyright issues here. Use for personal or commercial.

    ❤ Download 1 Million Designs Free Just One Click ❤
    You can download 1 million designs for free right now. Time is limited. So download for free now without delay.
    👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇
    https://www.freevectordownload.com

    ReplyDelete